Wednesday, 25 September 2013

Essays, Grades, and Burgers?

Agenda

Mr. Pro told us how to do in-text citations. Here is how you do it.

After that, we went over 2 essays that were good. Mr. Pro showed us that the essay should be filled with facts from trusted sources to back up our information. Here is the essay on algae and this is the one on the Mud Volcano.

Then, we learned how an essay is a lot like a hamburger. We need good matching parts in the burger and then when we eat it, it turns out really good. He also then demonstrated how to link the paragraphs. To learn how to link the paragraphs, you should look at the instructions below. You can find this document
here.





After that, we worked for about 40 minutes on our essays. Mr. Pro promised that if we wrote an essay as good as the sample ones, he would buy that person a burger.



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Agenda

Mr. Pro told us how to do in-text citations. Here is how you do it.

After that, we went over 2 essays that were good. Mr. Pro showed us that the essay should be filled with facts from trusted sources to back up our information. Here is the essay on algae and this is the one on the Mud Volcano.






Then, we learned how an essay is a lot like a hamburger. We need good matching parts in the burger and then when we eat it, it turns out really good. He also then demonstrated how to link the paragraphs. You can find these two things here.



After that, we worked for about 40 minutes on our essays. Mr. Pro promised that if we wrote an essay as good as the sample ones, he would buy that person a burger.


2 comments:

  1. You repeated the same screenshot of the examples of in-text citation.

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  2. Give examples from essays and transitions between paragraphs.

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