Sunday, 15 September 2013

Carol's Scribe Post- September 12,2013



Agenda- September 12,2013

















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Important Facts to remember-
  • September 16,2013- Essay Outline
  • September 24,2013 -Essay Draft
  • September 27,2013- Final Essay Due!
Essay must be 300-750 words

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Mr.Pro talked about the vocabulary of the science test. Also, we went over the test -
The important thing is   learn from your mistakes




Here is the link for the test correction:https://docs.google.com/a/graded.br/document/d/1XYQexoLMfl58k00ikKdZ6uhH4ku9-2L3sRK1Ws6ZukY/edit

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Students are working on essay- researching project.
The library has offered many books to research about our topics.

Remember-

Man-Made disasters:
  • Paragraph 1:IntroductionTechnology & Man-made disaster in a place
  • Paragraph 2:Explain the energy changes involved in the technology and its purpose for society (why it was created). 
  • Paragraph 3:Explain the energy change involved in the disaster and how it caused damage
  • Paragraph 4:Explain what was done after the disaster. 
  • Paragraph 5:ConclusionSummarize the main ideas.  Propose how similar disasters may be avoided in the future.  

Specific Energy
Technologies




Paragraph 1:
Introduction
General Topic, Specific Energy Technology
Paragraph 2:
Explain the energy changes involved in the technology and its purpose for society
(why it was created).
Paragraph 3:
Explain specific good points of the technology.
Paragraph 4:
Explain specific bad points of the technology.
Paragraph 5:
Summarize the main ideas.  
Propose how the technology may be used more in the future and/or how the technology may be improved in the future.

2 comments:

  1. Give an example of a complete outline.

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  2. What were some of the common mistakes on the test?

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